A Memory Called Empire
31 December 2023 1 Comment
Author: Arkady Martine
Summary: In a war of lies, she seeks the truth.
Ambassador Mahit Dzmare is posted far from her mining station home, to the Empire’s glorious capital. Yet when she arrives, she discovers her predecessor was murdered. But no one will admit his death wasn’t accidental – and she might be next.
Mahit must navigate the capital’s deadly halls of power, while hunting the killer. She must also somehow stop the Empire from annexing her fiercely independent colony. As she sinks deeper into this seductive yet unfamiliar culture, Mahit engages in intrigues of her own. For she’s hiding an extraordinary technological secret, one which might destroy her station and its way of life. Or it might save them all from annihilation.
Rating: ★★★☆☆ 3/5
Review: I decided to read this book because my partner absolutely loved it. And because it’s science fiction and sounded interesting, but mostly because they raved about it and I wanted to enjoy it that much as they did. Spoiler alert: I unfortunately did not.
I did enjoy it! The plot is interesting, with the main character, Mahit, taking over the job of her predecessor while simultaneously trying the solve his murder. As an ambassador Mahit is an interesting character, walking the line between loyalty to Lsel, the mining station she comes from, and her love of things Teixcalaan—the empire. I especially loved her admiration of the poetry along with her sadness of knowing she would never be a part of that world with the ease of a true Teixcalaanli.
My favourite character was Three Seagrass. She took a while to grow on me, as she at first came across quite arrogant, but I think as the affection between her and Mahit grew, so did my affection for her. And of course, where there is affection for Three Seagrass there has to be affection for her best friend, Twelve Azalea. I liked them, even though I was also suspicious of them. Everyone is a murder suspect, at first.
There is a lot of world- and character-building in this book. A lot of it relevant later on, as the story plays out and threads weave together. But also a lot of it not so relevant. I loved the aspects that did all pull together in the final chapters—that’s always satisfying. I also loved, perhaps even more, certain character details that didn’t lead anywhere specific. Eight Antidote’s desire to travel and see the worlds, Eight Loop’s missing intentions and motivations, Five Portico’s possible uses for the faulty imago-machine. I hope these are things that get explored in the sequel.
The world building… is where I start to not love the book as much. Because there is a lot of it. And that’s not necessarily a criticism, so much as it is me, personally, not enjoying it. I struggled to get into this book initially because there was just so much to take in. I am a very active reader and I like to take note of and fully absorb everything. But it was just overwhelming for me to do that here. I had to stop. I had to read much more casually, not memorising every new word or concept or detail. Which left me wondering what the point of all this world building is, if I’m skimming and forgetting most of it?
My only other complaint is that the writing seemed overly verbose a lot of the time. I think this is partly because so much of it is happening inside Mahit’s head. Not because of the other person she has in there (that actually helped—thought process via dialogue), but because she did so much thinking and figuring things out. All the way through she is choosing who to say what to and why—she’s never fully honest with anyone. And as she is assessing things and coming to conclusions and decisions it is all happening in her mind, which feels very awkward and clunky from a writing point of view. The show-to-tell ratio fell heavy on the tell, and I didn’t vibe with that.
I did still very much enjoy the book, and will certainly be reading the sequel at some point. There are a lot of loose threads that I hope get picked up, as there are several things I want to know more about. The sunlit and how they hell they work, the aliens and what’s going on with them, and of course Mahit and Three Seagrass and how their relationship develops.